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Poptart-
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Registration date : 2008-11-04
Re: song
by Dasher [THE Reindeer] Sat Nov 08, 2008 1:12 am
It's good, but to make it great it could be longer....
I wrote a song, but it's really sad, so I won't post it.
I wrote a song, but it's really sad, so I won't post it.
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Dasher [THE Reindeer]-
Number of posts : 5
Location : At the beach, crying when I see the sunset XD XD XD
Registration date : 2008-11-08 -
twilightkitty-
Number of posts : 343
Location : Forks, Wahington 98331 (If you read Twilight, you'll get it!)
Registration date : 2008-11-06
Taigan Sloths!-
Number of posts : 870
Location : The South Part of, South Africa
Registration date : 2008-11-03
song
by sweettee11 Tue Nov 04, 2008 9:44 pm
do you like my song?
LAST DAY
Verse 1
The Last Day, I saw you
You said you never wanted to see me again
I said Okay and then I started to run away
Verse 2
I was lonely you came back and said I'm sorry
But I don't care anymore
Chorus
Just remember that last day,
you broke my heart, you threw it away
I thought we had something good
but no-uh-oh
Verse 3
It's over, been over for a while
But you keep comin' back
Con't you take a hint it's over
We're over for good
Chorus
Last Day-ay-ay-hay
LAST DAY
Verse 1
The Last Day, I saw you
You said you never wanted to see me again
I said Okay and then I started to run away
Verse 2
I was lonely you came back and said I'm sorry
But I don't care anymore
Chorus
Just remember that last day,
you broke my heart, you threw it away
I thought we had something good
but no-uh-oh
Verse 3
It's over, been over for a while
But you keep comin' back
Con't you take a hint it's over
We're over for good
Chorus
Last Day-ay-ay-hay
sweettee11-
Number of posts : 36
Location : I live in america
Registration date : 2008-11-03
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